非常感谢Dear Jack,I’m mo

非常感谢Dear Jack,I’m mo
非常感谢Dear Jack,
I’m more than shocked that you’re smoking in t his photo.You didn’t (don't)look cool at all with a cigarette in the mouth.As(with) is known to al l is that smo king does great harms(harm) to ou r lungs,our heart a nd our brain as well.You wil l feel tiring(tired) out soon .And you’ll find (前后 两个单词之间加it)hard to play football with your fr iends again.What’s worse,once used with(to) it,it’ s very difficult to quit.I strongly suggest yo u sh ould give it up until (before)it’s too late.Fir stly,try to qui t it gradually so that you won’t fee l so badly.(bad) Se condly,be determined never not (去掉never或not)to start smokin g again.Thirdl y,try to make yourself interesting(interesting) in other things,like sports .
Yours Li Hua