Nuli told us what he wanted to be a scientist when he
| Nuli told us what he wanted to be a scientist when he 1. was in his childhood.He worked hard at all his lesson 2. and tried to enter into a famous university in China, 3. but he failed because the Cultural Revolution,which 4. forced him to make a living at the age of 16.He serves 5. as a farmer then a worker,but he spent his spare 6. time studied and was finally admitted into a local college. 7. He often says,“Young guys,do not lose the heart 8. when you are in trouble.Believe in yourself forever, 9. so you will surely make great progress sooner or later.” 10. |
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1.what改为that
2.lesson改为lessons
3.去掉into
4.because后面加of
5.serves改为served
6.but改为and
7.studied改为studying
8.去掉the
9.yourself改为yourselves
10.so改为and
1.what改为that he wanted to be a scientist是宾语从句,句子成分完整,所以前面的这个连接词应该是that。what引导名词性从句时,需要在从句中作主语、宾语、表语或定语。此题也可把what去掉。因为that引导宾语从句时,可省略。
2.lesson改为lessons 根据前面的定语all his可知此处要用复数形式。
3.去掉into enter是及物动词,后面不需要介词也可跟宾语。
4.because后面加of 这个原因状语是一个名词词组,所以要用短语介词because of。
5.serves改为served 这是叙述过去的事情。
6.but改为and 这一句话的前后是并列关系,并非转折关系。
7.studied改为studying 构成spend time doing...句式。
8.去掉the lose heart是习惯用语,heart是抽象名词。
9.yourself改为yourselves 此句中的这个反身代词指“young guys”。
10.so改为and 这是一个“祈使句+and+结果分句”句式。
2.lesson改为lessons
3.去掉into
4.because后面加of
5.serves改为served
6.but改为and
7.studied改为studying
8.去掉the
9.yourself改为yourselves
10.so改为and
1.what改为that he wanted to be a scientist是宾语从句,句子成分完整,所以前面的这个连接词应该是that。what引导名词性从句时,需要在从句中作主语、宾语、表语或定语。此题也可把what去掉。因为that引导宾语从句时,可省略。
2.lesson改为lessons 根据前面的定语all his可知此处要用复数形式。
3.去掉into enter是及物动词,后面不需要介词也可跟宾语。
4.because后面加of 这个原因状语是一个名词词组,所以要用短语介词because of。
5.serves改为served 这是叙述过去的事情。
6.but改为and 这一句话的前后是并列关系,并非转折关系。
7.studied改为studying 构成spend time doing...句式。
8.去掉the lose heart是习惯用语,heart是抽象名词。
9.yourself改为yourselves 此句中的这个反身代词指“young guys”。
10.so改为and 这是一个“祈使句+and+结果分句”句式。
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