英语作文：假设你和父母来到公园,看到公园里人山人海 .有人在谈话,有人在踢足球,有的人在散步 ...请你展开你的想象力,

Today is a sunny day, my parents and I went to the park.There are a lot of tourists.Some are playing games, others are flying kites.Suddenly, I saw a thief stealing things.I followed the thief quickly.At the same time, my parents called the police.The police arrived in two minutes.They helped me catch the thief.My parents and the police have said I was a brave boy.The park is full of warm atmosphere.我好像写篇了的样子。。。仅供参考

= =这就是我初一时候写的……那我再想想 Today is a sunny day,the sun is shining. My parents and I went to the park.I saw many beautiful flowers and trees.The butterfly all around flowers.I heard brids sang happily.There are a lot of people in the park.Some are playing games, others are flying kites.My parents sit and rest.Though I was tired,I had a good time .What a beautiful day!怎么样。。。可以吗