求助一句英语的改写These days,the proportion,which of the populationg

求助一句英语的改写
These days,the proportion,which of the populationg who are aged 15 or younge,experience a continuing increase in some countries.
这句话的语法对吗?
另外这句话是由
Figures show that in some countries there is an ever-increasing proportiong of the populationg who are aged 15 or younger.
改成的
我想知道后面这句话还有什么更好的改法吗?要求不照抄原句
是younger
qqddee 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

Violetpopo 花朵

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In some countries,population of those who are 15 or younger shows a continous increase in proportion.
or
In some countries,proportion of THE population who are 15 or youger shows a continous increase.

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huanghundao 幼苗

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你的改法很好!
无需赘言~

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htg_pl 幼苗

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改为These days, the proportion of which the population who are aged 15 or younger is experiencing a continuing increase in some countries。

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啊依哒公主 幼苗

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In some countries, the population of the group, aged 15 or younger, is constantly growing.

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