英语翻译我很喜欢音乐.当我走路时,坐车时,发呆时,上网时,还有睡觉前都会听歌.我喜欢的歌手是linkinpark和Tay

时态用一般现在时就好,因为你描述的是你的爱好,以及日常行为
最后一句 用 singers 然后用are 就可以了
没有打我的翻译,是因为我相信你自己的翻译应该会比我更好ww

I love music. I listent to music when I am taking bus, idling, surfing internet and trying to sleep. My favorite singers are inkinpark and Taylor Swift.

I like listening to the music. when i am walking, taking a bus, staring at something without consciousness,surfing the Internet or even before going to sleep, I will listen to the music. My favorite band is Linken Park while my favorite singer is Taylor Swift.