英语改错请求解答～急The college entrance exam is on their way and all

英语改错请求解答～急
The college entrance exam is on their way and all the teachers
work very hard ,encourage us to build up our confidence and
inspiring us to improve our studies .Whenever we meet with
difficulties ,they are readily to come to our help .Meanwhile ,our
school also provide great help for us students .For example ,the
library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekend .At
home ,our parents took good care of us so that we can always be full
of energy ,I'm very grateful for the efforts of my parents or teachers .
I'm determined to try my best to prepare the exam .I am sure that with
their help I'll achieve my goal and to be a useful person in the future .
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