英语改错共十处错误I’m more than shocked that you're smoking in this p
英语改错共十处错误
I’m more than shocked that you're smoking in this photo .You didn't look cool at all with a cigarette in the mouth .As is known to all is that smoking does great harms to our lungs .Our heart and our brain as well .You will feel tiring out soon ,And you'll find hard to play football with your friends again .What's more ,once used with it ,it‘s very difficult to quit .I strongly sggest you should give it up until it's too late .Firstly ,try to quit it gradually so that you won't feel so badly .Secondly,be determined never mot to start smoking again .Thirdly,try to make yourself interesting on other things ,like sports.
I’m more than shocked that you're smoking in this photo .You didn't look cool at all with a cigarette in the mouth .As is known to all is that smoking does great harms to our lungs .Our heart and our brain as well .You will feel tiring out soon ,And you'll find hard to play football with your friends again .What's more ,once used with it ,it‘s very difficult to quit .I strongly sggest you should give it up until it's too late .Firstly ,try to quit it gradually so that you won't feel so badly .Secondly,be determined never mot to start smoking again .Thirdly,try to make yourself interesting on other things ,like sports.
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I’m more than shocked that you're smoking in this photo. You didn't look cool at all with a cigarette in the mouth. (As改成What) is known to all is that smoking does great (harms改成harm) to our lungs, our heart and our brain as well. You will feel (tiring改成tired) out soon, And you'll find (加入it) hard to play football with your friends again. What's more, once used (with改成to) it, it‘s very difficult to quit. I strongly suggest you should give it up (until改成before) it's too late. Firstly, try to quit it gradually so that you won't feel so (badly改成bad). Secondly, be determined (去掉never或not) to start smoking again.Thirdly, try to make yourself (interesting改成interested) (on改成in) other things, like sports.
I’m more than shocked that you're smoking in this photo. You didn't look cool at all with a cigarette in the mouth. (As改成What) is known to all is that smoking does great (harms改成harm) to our lungs, our heart and our brain as well. You will feel (tiring改成tired) out soon, And you'll find (加入it) hard to play football with your friends again. What's more, once used (with改成to) it, it‘s very difficult to quit. I strongly suggest you should give it up (until改成before) it's too late. Firstly, try to quit it gradually so that you won't feel so (badly改成bad). Secondly, be determined (去掉never或not) to start smoking again.Thirdly, try to make yourself (interesting改成interested) (on改成in) other things, like sports.
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