求教英语语法,although,which is the reason,balabalabala.那个逗号怎么用?

求教英语语法,although,which is the reason,balabalabala.那个逗号怎么用?
我想说的是(英语的思维):尽管我所学的东西和实际工作有很大的差距,(这是我所申请的第二个原因),但是我做了很多别的来说试图shorten它。
Although there is a distance between what I have learnt and the practical work,which is the second reason of applying for a intern,省略N个字。我想问:which前加了逗号对不对,我想修饰前面的整句话;去掉了逗号,是不是就还成了修饰 the practical work。
或者我整句话都错了,压根就没这用法,帮重写个也行。总之要用到second reason,要从句,要长!
东风恶_欢情薄 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

还我钱 幼苗

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大致语法没什么错,建议practical work改成Actual job,另外the second reason of applying for a intern改成the second reason of me applying this as an intern.
呵,说实在的不喜欢太长太多丛句的句子,上司的这类句子让翻译的我头大……

1年前

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monk5469 幼苗

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Although the knowledge I obtained in classrooms may not matter much to my job, which is the second reason why I would like to apply for (加你要申请的东西),I have tried my best to work hard to combine what I have learned and pratical work together.

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a58712 幼苗

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不可以去掉逗号,正如你所说,因为只有非限定性定语从句才可以修饰整个句子。不明白楼主为什么要写长句子,语言讲究的是表达明确,没必要用长句子的时候强行改成长句子会显得罗嗦多余
which is the second reason for which i applied for.....是比较地道的用法...

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