短文改错。假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方

短文改错。
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong. Together with her mother, she
began to perform in the age of four. In the early 1980s, she took part in a local sing competition
and won the first prize. The song “Bad Girl” made him famous. The following years saw Anita
make many records. Some of her song were very popular. She was always ready to help others, but
she made a lot of good friends. When SARS hits Hong Kong, she organized several concerts with
other pop stars call on Hong Kong people to brave face the disease. Sadly, Anita died of the cancer
in 2003. The lady whom was brave and beautiful will always be remembered by people.
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