请帮我看一下这篇文章有什么语法问题,
请帮我看一下这篇文章有什么语法问题,
my deskmate
every students has their own deskmate.in the new term ,i have a new deskmate.her name is wukexin,but we call her Aleft.She is very good at english,but i am not.i am delighted to have a deskmate who is good at english.
she always help me to study english.she is very strict with me in my study.after class ,she strict instruct me of my english learning.（其实,我想写成：下课后,她严格的指导我的英语学习.严格的指导strict instruct 可以这么写吗?）
she is interested in psychology.especilly criming psychology.her dream is to become an expert in the psychology.in order to understand the more psychological knowledge .she joined in the psychology club.
in short ,my deskmate is a beautiful girl who is good at english and dream to become an psychology expert （最后一段可以这么翻译吗?：总之,我的同桌是一个擅长英语和梦想成为一个心理学专家的漂亮女孩0）
my deskmate
every students has their own deskmate.in the new term ,i have a new deskmate.her name is wukexin,but we call her Aleft.She is very good at english,but i am not.i am delighted to have a deskmate who is good at english.
she always help me to study english.she is very strict with me in my study.after class ,she strict instruct me of my english learning.（其实,我想写成：下课后,她严格的指导我的英语学习.严格的指导strict instruct 可以这么写吗?）
she is interested in psychology.especilly criming psychology.her dream is to become an expert in the psychology.in order to understand the more psychological knowledge .she joined in the psychology club.
in short ,my deskmate is a beautiful girl who is good at english and dream to become an psychology expert （最后一段可以这么翻译吗?：总之,我的同桌是一个擅长英语和梦想成为一个心理学专家的漂亮女孩0）
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My deskmate
Every student has his own deskmate. In the new term, Ihave a new deskmate. her name is Wu Kexin, but we call her Aleft. She is very good at English,but I am not. I am delighted to have a deskmate who is good at English.
She always helps me to study English.She is very strict with me in my study. After class, she strictly instructs me to learn my English. She is interested in psychology, especially criming psychology. Her dream is to become an expert in psychology. In order to understand more psychological knowledge, she joined in the psychology club.
后面句子翻译不错.
My deskmate
Every student has his own deskmate. In the new term, Ihave a new deskmate. her name is Wu Kexin, but we call her Aleft. She is very good at English,but I am not. I am delighted to have a deskmate who is good at English.
She always helps me to study English.She is very strict with me in my study. After class, she strictly instructs me to learn my English. She is interested in psychology, especially criming psychology. Her dream is to become an expert in psychology. In order to understand more psychological knowledge, she joined in the psychology club.
后面句子翻译不错.
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