急...求一篇中学生的英语作文《元宵节》(修改)

急...求一篇中学生的英语作文《元宵节》(修改)
我想修改一下这篇英语作文、:
元宵节-Lantern Festival
Lantern Festival is a China’s traditional festival.It is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year.
I,antern Festival is one of the biggest holidays in China.Several days before Lantern Festival,people begin to make lanterns.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.While making lanterns people usually write riddles on lanterns.On the eve of Lantern Festival,all the lanterns are hung up.
On Lantern Festival people go outside to have a look at the lanterns and guess the riddles on the lanterns.Perhaps you call see some wonderful folk performances,Dragon Dance and Yangko.Everything is very interesting and everyone is very happy.Our life is rich and varied.
就是、添加多一些细节和内容、要加中间那里的一两个谜语写出来、还有加一些看灯笼的美景和对灯笼的描写、动作描写、还有最后一句话前的细节描写、拜托有才的各位帮帮忙吧、好的再一定加分、(上面写着5分是因为我怕会关闭问题啊、我好穷)
如果实在不能按照上面的改、就另帮我写一篇关于元宵节的、要写的越长越有内容的好、就像上面我说的
(请不要有打酱油的来看热闹啊)
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