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Dear Linging,
I saw your letter,I hope you will have a good trip in HongKong.I also want to go there but I don't have time.I have to do my homework everyday.My English is not very good,so I want to go to HongKong to improve it.I also like music,I can go there to make music,too.I'd like to enjoy tasty food.I think the food in Hongkong is good for me.
Yours,
Pen pal
你的语序有点微乱,有些句子合并在一起会更通顺,我加了点词,合并了一下句子~
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