英语作文揪错Dear Linging,I saw your litter last,I hope you have a

英语作文揪错
Dear Linging,
I saw your litter last,I hope you have a good trip in HongKong.I also want to go to HongKong but I don't have time.I'm do homework every day.I like to learn language is English,because my English is very bad.so I want to go to HongKong learn language.I like music,I want to HongKong make music.I like foods very much.I think HongKong food is good for me.
Yours,
Pen pal.
代号404 - 五级请问:"I like to learn language is English" 还有"I want to HongKong make music"也有错!"迹部観网王FAN - 伍长 四级"我是让你揪错,没叫你批评我!你不就是英语学的好点么!猖什么猖!
bbq719 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

人了了不了了 幼苗

共回答了16个问题采纳率:81.3% 举报

Dear Linging,
I saw your letter,I hope you will have a good trip in HongKong.I also want to go there but I don't have time.I have to do my homework everyday.My English is not very good,so I want to go to HongKong to improve it.I also like music,I can go there to make music,too.I'd like to enjoy tasty food.I think the food in Hongkong is good for me.
Yours,
Pen pal
你的语序有点微乱,有些句子合并在一起会更通顺,我加了点词,合并了一下句子~

1年前

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xuanzh82 幼苗

共回答了37个问题 举报

litter-letter
I hope you 后边加个 will
I’m do homework 改成 I 去掉am
language is 去掉,病句,后边 because 改成although
i want to go to hongkong (to)learn english
make music 前边 也加个to
最后一句,hongkon...

1年前

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只剩二十分 幼苗

共回答了9个问题 举报

I saw your "letter"
I do homework
I like to learn language "such as" English
my English is "poor"
go to Hongkong to learn "English"
I like "food" very much
I think the food in Hongkong is good for me
说实话,真的有很多错啊……

1年前

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