请大家帮我看看这篇2012年安徽省中考英语作文有没有错误

请大家帮我看看这篇2012年安徽省中考英语作文有没有错误
We all want to make more friends, but how to get on well with others? Some students think we should learn to share. Sharing things which we like is a good way for us to get on well with others. other students think it's important for us to respect others. Another important thing is that communicating with each other. And I have some different suggestions.I think we should be polite when we talk with others.Above all, I believe if we are honest, we will get on well with others and make friends easily.