My name is WangTao .I'd like take the chance for the Two-wee

My name is WangTao .I'd like take the chance for the Two-week Eco-travel Round Australia.I'm17,a Senior
Two student from Guiyang.I have a great number of the hobbies,such as music,drawing or playing chess.Especially I'mfond of sports and travel.That's because I'm quite strong and healthy.Australia has long been my dream countries to visit There're plenty of interesting plants and animals in that magic land,which were what I want to learn personal.The travel will for sure help increase my knowledge of protect the environment and broaden your borizons.It may be very tired,but I still apply for the travel
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My name is WangTao .I'd like (加上to)take the chance for the Two-week Eco-travel Round Australia.I'm17,a Senior
Two student from Guiyang.I have a great number of the(去掉the) hobbies,such as music,drawing or (改成and)playing chess.Especially I'mfond of sports and travel.That's because(改成why) I'm quite strong and healthy.Australia has long been my dream countries(改成country) to visit There're plenty of interesting plants and animals in (改成on)that magic land,which were what I want to learn personal(改成personnaly).The travel will for sure help(加上to) increase my knowledge of protect (改成protecting)the environment and broaden your borizons.It may be very tired(改成tiring),but I still apply for the travel

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1 I'd like to 2 I have a great number of hobbies
3drawing and playing 4I'm fond of sports and travelling
5That's why I'm quite strong and healthy
6Australia has...

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