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Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇书信,文章开头结尾已经给出,只需要表达清楚要点。写作时首先要注意文章的段落结构,因为这是回信,所以第一段应该交代上封信的内容,要解答的问题。第二段主要是给出笔者的建议。第三段总结。其中第二段是重点。
在表达要点是切记不能逐字逐句翻译,不能用汉语式的表达,这就需要用地道的英语句型,还要使用一些常用短语,这样才能符合英语习惯。如:I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.这是非限制性定语从句的用法。还有It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. /it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits ,it做形式主语也是英语中常用的句型。studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.这句话中,while的用法也很巧妙。另外名词性从句也是英语写作中常用的,如:The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind。我们在写作中要熟练的运用这些常用句型,而且要经常尝试不同的表达法,不能千篇一律,才能写出好的文章。
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