英文段子检查语法错误~I most want to go to the United states.frist of a

英文段子检查语法错误~
I most want to go to the United states.
frist of all,there have The Statue of liberty.that’s a lot meaning for me ,this statue is my spirit idol When I was a little girl.
Secondly.There are the best universties.like Harvard,yale,stanford,and so on.that was my childhood dream .
Finally ,I love shopping ,there are many famous brands,like chanel,Prada,Hermes and can be discount.so I’m dying for those big brands.
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evabrosv 幼苗

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there have The Statue of liberty.
there不是名词哈
可改为 the statue of liberty lies in new york
best universties.like like前面的是句点?
brand只是牌子 最好改成name brand shops
……,Prada,Hermes and can be discount
这是= =
可以讲 and they may be at a deep discount !

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四月小蔷薇 幼苗

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The place I mostly want to go is Unites States, the reasons are shown below.
frist of all,United States has the Statue of liberty. It means a lot for me to visit there, this statue was my spirit i...

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aooboocoo 幼苗

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most改为mostly,there后面不能用have,that was my childhood dream中was改成is。there are many famous brands,like chanel,Prada,Hermes 这就是一句话后面不用and了,and can be discount再重新改成一句话。

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