请帮忙看看写的是否正确5 Topic:Should We Help Strangers?You must base yo

请帮忙看看写的是否正确
5 Topic:Should We Help Strangers?You must base your composition on the following instruction (given in Chinese).You composition should be no less than 160 words.
(1)简要描述现实中陌生人需要援助的不同情况.
(2)提出并论证你的观点.
(3)结论段
Should We Help Strangers?
In our daily life,we always meet some scene that there is a strager calling for your help.Because you don't know him anymore.Help him or not made us a hesitation.For instance,someone losts his wallet when he could not get contact with his friends,he asks you for some money.What for more,when there is an traffic accidnet occurred on the road,the stragers who is wounded to obfuscation under your sight .So many cases that we are facing the calling help from the strangers.It is a test time of our conscience.
To my opion,I adhere to the view of helping the strangers.I thought whether you know the man you are helping,when he is in the crisis,we must stretch our hand to them.
It is a provement of civilization.When you are helping the strangers,it's a good signal to show your friendship and care to other one.It would take warm feelings to others.And when the man with you help facing the same situation,he will act the same as you show to him.It is a deliver of love and make the world we are living better and warmer.
We should help the strangers.Not everyone meet troubles would get help from his friend.As a stranger to him,when your are strectching your arm to the stranger,you are embracing the soul and Benevolence of your own.
6 Topic:Volunteer Your Time.You must base your speech on the following outline.(no less than 120 words).
(1)介绍该慈善或公益活动(如:义务植树或授课,临终关怀等)
(2)参与这项活动的益处
(3)鼓励大家踊跃参与
Volunteer Your Time.
The free lecture to the public is a kind of obligation and volunteer action from our law scholar.When there is a activity to propagandize our country's codex,we used to attend the action to deliver the consciousness about law to our people.Futher more,we sent brochures printed with articles of law.
When you enter this activity,you could find you are building a moral line in human's brain by propagandism.It is another way to reduce the criminal.And it is a defend to the crime.As the knowledge of law establishing in our citizen's brain.Our society would be taken to a more harmonious situation.In the final,the crime would be nearly destroyed .
Hold your time to attend the activity of law propagandism.To be a volunteer of this activity,you will be the defender of justice.And the country would turn to be more civilized by your effort.
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In our daily life,we always meet some scene(scenes) that there is a strager calling for your help.Because you don't know him anymore(anyway).Help him or not made(makes) us a hesitation.For instance,someone losts(lost) his wallet when(and) he could not get (get in contact)contact with his friends,he asks you for some money.What for more,when there is(去掉there is) an(a) traffic accidnet(accident) occurred on the road,the stragers(stranger) who is wounded to obfuscation under your sight .So many cases that we are facing the calling help from the strangers.It is a test time of our conscience.
To(In) my opion,I adhere to the view of helping the strangers.I thought(think) whether you know the man you are helping,when he is in the crisis,we must stretch our hand to them.
It is a provement of civilization.When you are helping the strangers,it's a good signal to show your friendship(friendliness) and care to other one(the others).It would take warm feelings to others.And when the man with you(your) help facing the same situation,he will act the same as you show(did) to him.It is a deliver of love and make the world we are living better and warmer.
We should help the strangers.Not everyone meet troubles would get help from his friend.As a stranger to him,when your(you) are strectching your arm to the stranger,you are embracing the soul and Benevolence of your own.
6 Topic:Volunteer Your Time.You must base your speech on the following outline.(no less than 120 words).
(1)介绍该慈善或公益活动(如:义务植树或授课,临终关怀等)
(2)参与这项活动的益处
(3)鼓励大家踊跃参与
Volunteer Your Time.
The free lecture to the public is a kind of obligation and volunteer action from our law scholar.When there is a activity to propagandize our country's codex,we used to attend the action to deliver the consciousness about law to our people.Futher more,we sent brochures printed with articles of law.
When you enter(take part in) this activity,you could find you are building a moral line in human's brain by propagandism.It is another way to reduce the criminal(crimes).And it is a defend to the crime.As the knowledge of law establishing in our citizen's brain(mind).Our society would be taken to(into) a more harmonious situation.In the final(end),the crime would be nearly destroyed .
Hold your time to attend the activity of law propagandism.To be a volunteer of this activity,you will be the defender of justice.And the country would turn to be more civilized by your effort
只是我个人的意见,你参考看看吧.我尽力了.看不懂的我就没改.

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