马上就要开学了,我是小升初.那么我自己写了英语自我介绍,我希望大家可以帮我修改一下.

马上就要开学了,我是小升初.那么我自己写了英语自我介绍,我希望大家可以帮我修改一下.
Holly,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like orang.Travel,singing,reading,swimming,dancing is my hobby.My Chinese is good,but my math is not so well.I love a laugh girl.Happy every day..so,I hope that in the new school,new term is a new and happy start.And a new teacher of new students,study hard,make progress every day!Come on!
我也是按照字典自己写的,但是语法啊,用词啊可能不会太准确,那么大家帮我修改一下,或者有什么没有写进去的,帮我加进去,
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枫依林 幼苗

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Hello,everyone.My name is x x.I'm 157 cm,37 kg.I'm twelve years old this year.I am an active,bright,friendly and humorous girl.So happy to stand here and introduce myself to you.I have many hobbies,su...

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woshiren998 幼苗

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这种程度的话,建议你还是汉语说吧,没有特点,太一般。

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tianbianshu0323 幼苗

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Hello,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like to eat orange. and i also like Travelling,singing,reading,swimming,dancing . My Chinese is good, but my math is not so well.I like to be a nic...

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uhygly 幼苗

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Hello,every one.My name is ××.I’m 157 cm.I’m 37 kg.I like to eat orange. and i also like Travelling,singing,reading,swimming,dancing . My Chinese is good, but my math is not so well.I like to be a nic...

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