一篇英语短文,请大家看看有没有错的地方!

一篇英语短文,请大家看看有没有错的地方!
When I was a child ,you tought me how to speak ,how to learn ,and most important you tought me how to be a people .now I can't find any proper word to appreciate your bringing me up .your love is always so strong ,so powerful .When I do something right or wrong ,your voice is arround me .
You tought me how to respect others and how to hononr myself .Dad ,you have told me everyone on the earth is equal .love everything you come upon at heart.
I think when I have my own child ,I will follow your way to teach it .Make it a good character .Don't worry me so much though I know I'm only a child in your eyes .but I'm grown-up.
finaly ,let me say love you again .
your dear son
蟲蟲飛123 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

钛合金素心 幼苗

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When I was a child ,you tought me how to speak ,how to learn ,and it is most important of you to tought me how to be a people .Now I can't find any proper word to appreciate your bringing me up .your love is always so strong and so powerful .When I do something right or wrong ,your voice is arround me .
You tought me how to respect others and how to hononr myself .Dad ,you have told me everyone on the earth is equal .love everything you come upon at heart.
I think when I have my own child ,I will follow your way to teach it .Make it a good character .Don't worry me so much though I know I'm only a child in your eyes .but I'm grown-up.
finaly ,let me say love you again .
your dear son

1年前

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鼠眼看天 幼苗

共回答了2个问题 举报

some mistakes:
1. the most important thing you taught me is ...a person
2.love everything which you come across frome the bottom of heart
3.Finaly,..I love you

1年前

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