英语改错（急）i am a middle school student name li ming.i am writin

i am a middle school student name （named,过去分词做后置定语) li ming. i am writing to tell you something.recddntly (recently,拼错) i noticed many of my classmates often go (went) to the cyber cafe near our school. i went there too in (去掉,the other day 前没有介词） the other day. i was surprising （surprised,-ed分词的主语通常是人,-ing通常修饰物) to see many students playing computer ganmes (games),watching films or chat (chatting,与前面的动词是并列成分,故用-ing).some students were even talking about love affairs online. on (In) my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place which (where,定语从句,地点,状语) we can find much useful informations (information,不可数名词).the internet should be a window to the outside world rather than pjace (the place,特指) for games