求修改英语作文Talking about the future,who also don't know what wil
求修改英语作文
Talking about the future,who also don't know what will be,so the ideal."Be able to travel around the world" this is my original dream,but now I want to be able to open a cake shop,do the delicious snacks."People mood will become very good at eating sweets." This is aunt told me,So I hope I can make many delicious desserts,make people feel happy.But I don't know if you could succeed.
Talking about the future,who also don't know what will be,so the ideal."Be able to travel around the world" this is my original dream,but now I want to be able to open a cake shop,do the delicious snacks."People mood will become very good at eating sweets." This is aunt told me,So I hope I can make many delicious desserts,make people feel happy.But I don't know if you could succeed.
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时态自己改 一致
concern 改成 concerning
telling 改成 tells
concern with 改成 focus on
those little things might be very important ones.
we always listen to people who talk with each other.
However they usually escape the reality
Maybe these people won‘t be successful.
as a university student,we should start from
minor work
Big things are all consisted of trifle ones
If we can accomplish things around our daily life well one by one,we will become better and better.
希望对你能有所帮助.
concern 改成 concerning
telling 改成 tells
concern with 改成 focus on
those little things might be very important ones.
we always listen to people who talk with each other.
However they usually escape the reality
Maybe these people won‘t be successful.
as a university student,we should start from
minor work
Big things are all consisted of trifle ones
If we can accomplish things around our daily life well one by one,we will become better and better.
希望对你能有所帮助.
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