英语改错,也可能没有错误.1 many American tea kettles whistle when the wa

可以肯定,还是有不少错误的.且对比一下为你提供的正确句子.请注意要正确使用定冠词、大小写和标点符号,如句号和逗号前不留空格,逗号后面要空一格,否则你每句都错了.
1 Many American tea kettles whistle when the water inside starts to boil.
contained可去掉,但光留contained反而怪怪的.
2 Many mountain animals have hooves more developed than similar animals living on land.
more 前面可加that are
3 The price of a new car runs anywhere from around S11,500 to over S1 million.
4 study sickness while you are well.这是祈使句,但study sickness令人不知所云.
Prevent sickness while you are well.
5 The kitchens of many dormitaries are common areas that can be used by all the residents there.
6 Pilot whales have big,round,bolbous head and are members of the dolphin family.
7 This waxy,pearly solid is chiefly for making cosmetics and was once used as a fuel.
8 Also known as orcinus orca,the killer whale is a predatory member of the dolphin family.
9 Aluminum is the most abundant metal in the Earth's crust,but the nonmetals such as oxygen and silicon are even more abundant.
10 Anthropologists agree that our primitive ancestors who inhabited the tropics probably had natural protection against the sun.

第二句语法没错，是意义不通，应该改为Many moutain animals have hooves more developed than similar animals living on land do(have).供您参考。

1 对的!
2 忧郁。没看出错来。等另外的高手把。
3 run→runs…另 用了anywhere from了还用or more?不清楚可能这里是想表达about 的意思吧。
4 是，while→when。
5 common area→ shared/public space。
6 round big…但不确定，没改这么无聊的把= =。
7 soli...