帮忙进行英语改错Hi!Hello,everyone.I am very glad to be here for this
帮忙进行英语改错
Hi!Hello,everyone.I am very glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Xu Jinghan,from Guizhou,Guiyang,16 years old this year,from Guizhou County of Guiding province.There are four people at home,father,mother,sister and me,we love each other,and happy life.I love singing though don't sing well but they like on the line,I have many shortcomings,but I believe I will correct these shortcomings.I am very honored to have the opportunity to introduce myself to you,also hope to succeed in a job interview today.Thank you very much
这是中文：我很高兴能来到这里面试.首先让我介绍一下我自己.我叫徐镜涵,来自贵州贵阳,今年16岁,来自贵州省贵定县.家里有四口人,爸爸,妈妈,姐姐和我,我们都很爱彼此,并且生活的很快乐.我很爱唱歌虽然唱的不好听但是自己喜欢就行,我这个人有许多缺点,但我相信我以后一定会改正这些缺点.我很荣幸有机会向您介绍自己,也希望今天能够面试成功.
有不好的地方也麻烦大家帮忙修改一下了
Hi!Hello,everyone.I am very glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Xu Jinghan,from Guizhou,Guiyang,16 years old this year,from Guizhou County of Guiding province.There are four people at home,father,mother,sister and me,we love each other,and happy life.I love singing though don't sing well but they like on the line,I have many shortcomings,but I believe I will correct these shortcomings.I am very honored to have the opportunity to introduce myself to you,also hope to succeed in a job interview today.Thank you very much
这是中文：我很高兴能来到这里面试.首先让我介绍一下我自己.我叫徐镜涵,来自贵州贵阳,今年16岁,来自贵州省贵定县.家里有四口人,爸爸,妈妈,姐姐和我,我们都很爱彼此,并且生活的很快乐.我很爱唱歌虽然唱的不好听但是自己喜欢就行,我这个人有许多缺点,但我相信我以后一定会改正这些缺点.我很荣幸有机会向您介绍自己,也希望今天能够面试成功.
有不好的地方也麻烦大家帮忙修改一下了
赞 ncepu 幼苗
共回答了18个问题采纳率：94.4% 举报
Hello,everyone.I am very glad to be here for this interview.First,allowed me introduce myself.My name is Xu Jinghan.I'm from Guiyang,I'm sixteen.There are four people in my family.My parents,sister and I.We love each other.And we are happy in my life.I love singing.But don't sing good.I think I love my songs is good.I have lots of shortcomings.But I believe I can correct it.I am very honored introduce myself to youHowever,hope I can interview today.Thank you for your listening.
改好了,你是不是有的百度翻译的,有很多地方都没有主语,都不是一个完整的句子,以后尽量自己写,写多了就会了,里面有一些句子我把你的原句给你改了一下,但是还是原来的意思!希望可以帮到你!
改好了,你是不是有的百度翻译的,有很多地方都没有主语,都不是一个完整的句子,以后尽量自己写,写多了就会了,里面有一些句子我把你的原句给你改了一下,但是还是原来的意思!希望可以帮到你!
1年前
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JWHW118 幼苗
共回答了8个问题 举报
你好~，希望我的回答对您有所帮助>w<.
Hi 和Hello，只要一个就够了，不能重复哦
在标准英语中，小的地方要先写再写大的范围，即I'm from Guiyang, Guizhou. （例：中国人喜欢说中国江苏省北京，英语就是反过来的习惯：北京江苏中国）
建议不要写太多重复的地址。（担心删了字数不够？写追问，帮你添些别的）已经说了来自贵州贵阳，又在半句话后说贵州省略繁琐~
There are four people at home... 改为“I have a family of four. My father, mother, sister and I."（楼主，记得把me改成 I 哟=3=
We love each other, and happy life 语法不当，改为 ”We are a happy family, and I am glad to have such a pleasant life living with them."
I love singing though I could not sing well. However, I still love to sing and please myself. (please v. 使...高兴）
相信这些检查能让楼主的自我简介变得更加学术和成功！
>w<祝愿面试顺利~~
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