请帮忙修改语法1.Make food by yourselfSala looks like a very healthy
请帮忙修改语法
1.Make food by yourself
Sala looks like a very healthyfood,however,the Sala in restaurant with Sala souses and the bread withbutter,they are not healthy any more.I am very clear that,you must make foodby yourself if you want to know what you were realy eaten.You would pay muchattention to how much salts and sugar you had eaten,and how much fat you putin your body.
2.Don’t use your cellphone every time
You use too much times to sendand received massages and refresh the community website,and sometimes you waslike “body here and heart absent”,because your eyes on the phone.Not long agoI had done a things very embarrassed,I looked at the e-mail which is relatedto my work from beginning to end,when I was having a dinner with my friend,and when I looked up,I found my friend was waiting I finish the “engagement”with my phone.Looking cellphone when have dinner with friend,it is not onlydisturb to your friend,but also very rude and misbehavior.So it’s time to putdown your cellphone.
At the end I want to say,expectthese,we should do more sports,drinking more water,eating less sugar anddon’t worry too much!Thanks for listening,let’s do it from now.
1.Make food by yourself
Sala looks like a very healthyfood,however,the Sala in restaurant with Sala souses and the bread withbutter,they are not healthy any more.I am very clear that,you must make foodby yourself if you want to know what you were realy eaten.You would pay muchattention to how much salts and sugar you had eaten,and how much fat you putin your body.
2.Don’t use your cellphone every time
You use too much times to sendand received massages and refresh the community website,and sometimes you waslike “body here and heart absent”,because your eyes on the phone.Not long agoI had done a things very embarrassed,I looked at the e-mail which is relatedto my work from beginning to end,when I was having a dinner with my friend,and when I looked up,I found my friend was waiting I finish the “engagement”with my phone.Looking cellphone when have dinner with friend,it is not onlydisturb to your friend,but also very rude and misbehavior.So it’s time to putdown your cellphone.
At the end I want to say,expectthese,we should do more sports,drinking more water,eating less sugar anddon’t worry too much!Thanks for listening,let’s do it from now.
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Make food by yourself
Salad looks like a very healthy food.However,salad in restaurant with salad dressing sauce,bread and butter,they are no longer healthy anymore.I am very sure that,you must make your own food if you want to know what you are really eaten.You should pay much more attention on how much salts and sugar you had eaten,and how much fat you put into your body.
2. Don’t use your cellphone every time
You use too much time to send and received massages and refresh the community website,and sometimes you are like “body here and heart absent”,because your eyes on the phone.Recently,I had did somthing that is very embarrassed,I looked at the e-mail which is related to my work from very beginning to the end,when I was having dinner with my friend,and when I looked up to my friend,I found he/she was waiting me to finish the “engagement”with my phone.Playing cellphone when having dinner with friend will not only disturbs your friend,but it also considered a very rude and misbehavior.So it’s time to putdown your cellphone.
At the end I want to say,inspite of that,we should also do more exercise,drink more water,eat less sugar and don’t worry too much!Thanks for listening,let’s start do it from now.
大致上这样改吧,应该ok.
Salad looks like a very healthy food.However,salad in restaurant with salad dressing sauce,bread and butter,they are no longer healthy anymore.I am very sure that,you must make your own food if you want to know what you are really eaten.You should pay much more attention on how much salts and sugar you had eaten,and how much fat you put into your body.
2. Don’t use your cellphone every time
You use too much time to send and received massages and refresh the community website,and sometimes you are like “body here and heart absent”,because your eyes on the phone.Recently,I had did somthing that is very embarrassed,I looked at the e-mail which is related to my work from very beginning to the end,when I was having dinner with my friend,and when I looked up to my friend,I found he/she was waiting me to finish the “engagement”with my phone.Playing cellphone when having dinner with friend will not only disturbs your friend,but it also considered a very rude and misbehavior.So it’s time to putdown your cellphone.
At the end I want to say,inspite of that,we should also do more exercise,drink more water,eat less sugar and don’t worry too much!Thanks for listening,let’s start do it from now.
大致上这样改吧,应该ok.
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各位大师请帮忙修改一下这段话（我自己写的）的语法或单词错误,
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你能帮帮他们吗