Friends , Please come to help me,thanks a lot !

Friends , Please come to help me,thanks a lot !
Hello my friends from Wenwen . I'm a undergraduate college student in xi'an. I have join the CET 4 last year. But I don't pass it. I just gain three hundred and sixty ,but it has a reason . that's my first to join the CET, and before then I never do any pratise about CET 4. So I don't know the answer card has two side,on the Write part I just finish one side,the word count is not enough at all. When the teacher collect the answer card I find I just finish one side. Then I get a bad mind , even I want to stop this examination. But I don't give up after I think a while .Finally I go out from the classroom. I am sure I can pass . This year is my last chace to pass CET. I don't have much time to study english . My major is coputer apply technology. I am searching a work now.I don't know whether I can pass it. I think maybe I can . At last I have a question. I hope you can answer it . This writing is I write without any tools . I write it in a relax status myself . I ask you to check it .Find the wrong words,bad syntax and tell me , if I keep the status that write this writing , can I pass CET? My girlfriend and parents both hope I can pass it . My brother is ready to pass the GRE.So , Please help me. I do hope you can answer this question if you have enough time. Thank you finish read it . My friends.NOTE: Please don't directly answer YES or NO, tell me reason,please. Thanks! AND: This is NOT a translate question , please understand it deep!