英语是否正确?It is your shown attracted me and I love you graduall

英语是否正确?
It is your shown attracted me and I love you gradually.After that,I began to understand you.I watch the Game you had play,when I see you shoot directly at the goal on 40M from the door.How I want to hug you!
我想表达,您的表现深深的吸引了我,并且我渐渐的喜欢上了你,从此以后,我开始去了解您.我去看您以前的比赛,当我看到你在距离球门40m以外的地方射门而入的时候,我是多么想去现场拥抱你
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cnyiping 幼苗

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i was attracted to your excellent performance and gradually started to like you.since then,i wanted to have a better understand about you,so i began to go to watch the videotape of your matches.when i saw you shooting 40m far from the goal,you had no idea how much i wanted to hug you.

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guaidhu 幼苗

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第一句应该不能这样写，and 的前后动词时态要一致，但是你这句这样表达又不能单纯的改时态
I watch the Game you had play
应改成 i watched the game you had played .
后面断句应该改成
When 这句大写, how 小写 ，这两句并成一句
when I saw you shooting

1年前

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kkzb 幼苗

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时态不一致
your shown attracted me deeply and I fell in love with you gradually.After that,I tried to know you, so I watch the Game you had played,and when I saw you shot directly at the goal on 40M away from the door.How I want to hold you!
凑合看吧

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ere20 幼苗

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Your performance attracted me deeply and i began to fall in love with you gradually.After that I began to understand you, to watch your former games and I wish so much to give you a hug on seeing your shoot 40m away from the goal

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早晨之星 幼苗

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I was deeply impressed by your performance. The 40M goal was just brilliant!!!
其他的不用说了,因为英语不是这样表达的.
恕我直言,是很肉麻的.
只射40M就I love you gradually, or I began to understand you! How I want to hug you! ............
好像不对阿!!

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爱鱼fish 幼苗

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Your performance has deeply attracted me and I have taken to(喜欢上）you gradually .Since then,I began to learn more about you.I watched your previous matches.How I want to embrace you at the scene when I saw you volleying the ball 40m away from the goal.

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