求一篇英语作文!说说一种现象 时髦商品是新鲜空气,纯净水和绿色食品.就是人们的生活品质更高了.

Former home is very narrow,in the narrow home,we have an even activities,there is no space in hot in summer,the small home often let us hot sleepless.The furniture in the home is accumulated in the house helter-skelter,action is not easy.
Ever since the new home,living space becomes very broad,everyday you have a home,you can see the furniture was neatly ranged in the hall.I also had their own small room,I can in their own little room heartily play.Burning hot summer,we open the electric fan,that the cool wind and then let I soon fall asleep.New home too good,I like new home environment.
主要是写以前的家狭小,现在的家大.可不可以再加点悬赏分?