求英语大神检查下面这段话有没有错误。。。谢(●'◡'●)

求英语大神检查下面这段话有没有错误。。。谢(●'◡'●)
Brian went to east from his house and he met Albert in a store that far from his house 5m.Brian talked with Albert for 5minutes and Albert wanted Brian to play basketball with him.So Brian used 10minutes came back home and used 5minutes to find hia basketball at home.Then Brian went to the basketball court for 10minutes and they play basketball for 30 minutes.Finally, Brian came back his house.
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lqd798010 幼苗

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第一行far前面加is
第二行came应该是come,因为前面已经用了used
第三行hia应该是his,for改成in
第四行:back后面加to

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