高一英语问题,十万火急!对下列文章进行改错,共10处错,每行一处：It was first time our paren

高一英语问题,十万火急!
对下列文章进行改错,共10处错,每行一处：
It was first time our parents allowed us to go to the
New Year's party,and we were all very exciting.My uncle
gave my cousins and I a bit of wine,and said,"Now enjoy
yourself,but don't get drunk!"I was pretty frightened,
and I sipped my wine very slowly.I believed I was
taking big risk with my health and maybe with my
all future.You see,I was six years old at the time.Later
I wanted to keep up with them,and I didn't want to destroy
me.So I drank grape juice instead.Years later I finally
told them the truth.You guess what?They had been drinking grape juice too!（此句无错）