关于英语的.看看这篇作文有哪个单词错.computer and IMr Samsung,an excellent com

关于英语的.
看看这篇作文有哪个单词错.
computer and I
Mr Samsung,an excellent computer,is my best friend.he has a big advantage that he works quite fast ,which help me a lot.
The first time you see him,you must think he is handsome,because he has a cool black outlook.In front of his console,there is a convinient switch.Only if I press the switch slightly,I can always enjoy surfing the Internet immidiately.
I regularly share a happy hours with Mr Samsung every Friday evening,Often times I lisen to music,chat with friends on the net.Sometimes I use his fashional telephone to comunicate with revelants.But I mainly use the computer to searth for information.Thanks to those information,no problem has ever troubled me.
However,sometimes Mr Samsung would get sick.At those occassions,Itake care of him as if looked after a patient.No matter how serious the virus is,it's just a piece of cake to me.It just takes me several minutes to kill the virus and then Mr Samsung will become healthy very soon.
Nowadays,Mr Samsung is not only a good hepler,but also a best friend to me.