帮忙查找英语短文中的问题Everyone wants to do the things they like,me too

帮忙查找英语短文中的问题
Everyone wants to do the things they like,me too.I have too much homework to do every day,so I always feel unhappy.I would like to go for a walk rather than study at home.I want to go somewhere that is fun for me.I like to listen to music .I think it's comfortable to listen to the music .I perfer music that is gentle ,because I can feel my heart beat.