I am sincere and have strong sense of responsibility病句修改
I am sincere and have strong sense of responsibility病句修改 就是想表达“我为人诚实,有强烈的责任感”,主要是后半部分“have strong sense of responsibility"可以怎么修改就可以和前面的be动词保持一致了呢? P.S. 其实一共有三句话,结构类似(有点排比的感觉),这第一话总觉得是病句 请各位高手指点~
楼上的说的不对诶……这个句子中间有and 是一个并列结构,所以am 与 have并不矛盾 是a sense 这一点要注意 按照楼主的要求改的话 I am sincere with a strong sense of responsibility. 如果不要按照be的结构 也可以说成 I have a quality of sincereness and a strong sense of responsibility.
这句话确实是病句 因为 该句子中 am 和 have 都作谓语。 而句子结构中主语后面只能跟一个谓语,所以可以改成并列句: I am honest and I have a good / high sense of responsibility. (and前am做谓语,and后have做谓语) 或 I have a good / high sense of ...
i have strong sense of responsibility and sincerity in.... i have strong sense of responsibility, of sincerity and ...把后面的词也可以放进来只要是名词就行。 不然你只能改成be responsible了。