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Advantages and Disadvantages of Taking a Part -time Job
Nowadays,more and more students chose to take a part-time job in there spare time ,especially on their holidays.
From my point of view, taking a part-time job has tow aspects for us.On the one hand,it privide us an opportunity to take what we learnt into pritice,which can add our social experience.Besides ,it can help us earn some money to pay our school tuition and train ourselves.On the other hand,a part -time job may waste us a lot of time,which can influence our study.

利：自力更生 regeneration through one's own efforts 锤炼自己 be tempered by a part-time job 减轻家庭负担 relieve one's parents of expenditure