求高手给力解决英语改错10个错误

求高手给力解决英语改错10个错误
during the summer holiday,i helped my parents did a lot of housework,like cooking,washing and clean the house .at first ,i didn't know what to do these things,but thanks to my mother,i learned a lot of.at the end of each day ,when my parents came home after a day's hard works,they could see clean house and enjoy the dishes i cooked for them.the smile on their faces were the best award for my efforts.i felt very happy though exhausting.helping my parents was challenging and very rewarding.it made my holiday much meaningful
树木缘 1年前 已收到7个回答 举报

芬也 幼苗

共回答了17个问题采纳率:88.2% 举报

1.holiday,holidays 2.did a lot of housework ,do a lot of housework 3.clean the house ,cleaning the house 4.what to do ,how to do 5.but,去掉 6.learned a lot of ,learned a lot7.hard works ,hard work 8.the smile ,the smiles 9.exhausting,exhausted10.much meaningful,very meaningful.

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昨夜下雨了 幼苗

共回答了32个问题 举报

during the summer holiday,i helped my parents do a lot of housework,like cooking,washing and cleaning the house .at first ,i didn't know how to do these things,but thanks for my mother,i learned a lot...

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耶椤迦那 幼苗

共回答了15个问题采纳率:93.3% 举报

i helped my parents did did改成do
like cooking,washing and clean the house clean改成cleaning
,i didn't know what to do these things what改成 how
,i learned a lot of of去掉
each day 改成every day
enjoy 改成enjoyed

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doujianghai888 幼苗

共回答了10个问题 举报

  1. did改成:(to)do

  2. clean 改:cleaning

  3. what改:how

  4. a lot of 改:a lot

  5. works 改work

  6. enjoy改 enjoyed

  7. were改was

  8. thank改thanked

    剩下的暂时不知道额- -

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寻找一扇窗 幼苗

共回答了1个问题 举报

1.did---do 因为 help sb do sth
2.clean---cleaning 因为前面是and 连接,所以谓语动词应该保持一致
3.of---去掉,加上of后面要跟一个宾语
4.exhausting---改为exhausted,因为是形容人的
5.much--改为very,very一般修饰形容词和副词,much修饰动词,比较级
6.wha...

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woai75 幼苗

共回答了4个问题 举报

During the summer holiday,I helped my parents did (此处did改为do,考察"help sb. do sth.)a lot of housework,like cooking,washing and clean (此处的clean应该为cleaning,考察考生是否细心,和基础)the house .At first ,I didn't know ...

1年前

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313670020 幼苗

共回答了8个问题 举报

不考虑字母大小写问题的话:

  1. 第一行 I helped my parents did…did应该改为do,help sb. do sth.是固定搭配

  2. 第一行末尾clean应改为cleaning,表示和前面动作的并列

  3. 第二行what to do应改为how to do

  4. 第二行末尾应改为learned a lot,后面如果不加名词的话不可以跟of

  5. 第三行works应改为work,一般说工作的话,work是不可数名词,而works表示著作

  6. 第三行末尾see clean house最好在clean house前加上the,特指你的家;enjoy改为enjoyed

  7. 第四行smile是不可数名词,后面的were应改为was

  8. award一般用来表示奖项,最好用reward(回报)

  9. 第四行最后一句最好前说虽然很累,但很开心

  10. 第五行challenging and very rewarding之间的and改为but,表示转折关系

  11. 最后一句,我建议用一般现在时,因为这整件事对你的假期的影响不只是在过去,现在你仍然是这么觉得的

以上有部分属于个人观点,不一定都是对的,我想你可以去找一下你的英语老师,通过面批,你能学到更多东西

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