英译汉,求改错!she thinks combining the events will make it the mos

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she thinks combining the events will make it the most amazing three—way celebration ever．”
她认为结合事件会使它最惊人的三进球庆祝.”
JLS star Marvin proposed(求婚)to Rochelle during a festive break in Antigua,and The Saturdays singer was keen to announce the news as soon as possible．“It’s official Marvin proposed 2 me 2day, wanted 2tell u b4 some1 else did! So excited 2 b Mrs Humes.”she tweeted(微博留言)on December 31．She also posted a photo of her and her husband-to-be in which she flashes her ￡45,000 heart-shaped diamond engagement ring．
如果明星马尔文（求婚）罗谢尔在节日在安提瓜,和星期六歌手渴望发布消息,尽快.”马尔文正式提出了2我想你了,2tell过对方吗!如此兴奋2夫人休姆斯.”她啾啾（微博留言）在十二月三十一日.她还公布了一张她和她的丈夫在她闪烁她的￡45000心形的钻石订婚戒指.
我改错：
她感觉三件事合在一起庆祝可以更令人惊喜?
She felt three things together to celebrate can be even more pleasant surprise?
JLS明星马尔文是在安提瓜过节时向罗谢尔求的婚,这位星期六歌手渴望媒体尽快发布消息.”马尔文正式向我求婚有两天了,希望最早告诉大家!能成为休姆斯夫人很兴奋.”她在在十二月三十一日微博留言中说.她还公布了一张她和她的准丈夫的合影,照片中在她戴着价值￡45000的心形钻石订婚戒指JLS star Malvin is a holiday in Antigua to Rochelle to seek the marriage, the Saturday singers for media news release as soon as possible." Malvin officially proposed to me two days, I hope the earliest to tell you! To become Mrs Humes was very excited." In December 31st she in micro-blog message said. She also posted a photo of her and her prospective husband's photo, photograph in her wearing value $45000diamond engagement ring.

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