麻烦各位帮忙改一篇英语作文,My.Hometown提示：1.我的家乡是中国的首都北京.2.北京是一座美丽的城市,天安门,
麻烦各位帮忙改一篇英语作文,
My.Hometown
提示：1.我的家乡是中国的首都北京.
2.北京是一座美丽的城市,天安门,故宫位于北京的中心.
3.北京有很多名胜古迹,如天坛（the Temple of Heaven）,颐和园（the Summer Palace）和北海公园等.
4北京还有很多购物中心.
5.每年都有很多游客到北京观光旅游.我爱我的家乡.
My Hometown
My hometown is Beijing,the capital of China.Beijing is a beautiful city .The Tian An Men in the centre of Beijing.Beijing has a lot of （名胜古迹不会写）.Such as,the Temple of Heaven,the Summer Palace and the Beihai park.Beijing has a lot of the centre of shopping.There are many visitors go sightseeing to Beijing and treval.
I love my hometown very much.
welcome to my hometown.
My.Hometown
提示：1.我的家乡是中国的首都北京.
2.北京是一座美丽的城市,天安门,故宫位于北京的中心.
3.北京有很多名胜古迹,如天坛（the Temple of Heaven）,颐和园（the Summer Palace）和北海公园等.
4北京还有很多购物中心.
5.每年都有很多游客到北京观光旅游.我爱我的家乡.
My Hometown
My hometown is Beijing,the capital of China.Beijing is a beautiful city .The Tian An Men in the centre of Beijing.Beijing has a lot of （名胜古迹不会写）.Such as,the Temple of Heaven,the Summer Palace and the Beihai park.Beijing has a lot of the centre of shopping.There are many visitors go sightseeing to Beijing and treval.
I love my hometown very much.
welcome to my hometown.
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改动后的：
My hometown is Beijing,the capital of China.Beijing is a beautiful city .The Tian An Men is in the center（centre,英式拼写） of Beijing.Beijing has a lot of historic places,such as the Temple of Heaven,the Summer Palace and the Beihai park.In addition,Beijing has a lot of shopping malls/centers.Every year,many travelers take sightseeing tours in Beijing.（这里要用there be句型吗?用的话是：there are many travelers taking sightseeing tours in Beijing).
I love my hometown very much.
Welcome to my hometown.
你的原文写的很不错呢~
My hometown is Beijing,the capital of China.Beijing is a beautiful city .The Tian An Men is in the center（centre,英式拼写） of Beijing.Beijing has a lot of historic places,such as the Temple of Heaven,the Summer Palace and the Beihai park.In addition,Beijing has a lot of shopping malls/centers.Every year,many travelers take sightseeing tours in Beijing.（这里要用there be句型吗?用的话是：there are many travelers taking sightseeing tours in Beijing).
I love my hometown very much.
Welcome to my hometown.
你的原文写的很不错呢~
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1.The Tian An Men in the .... 改成Tian An Men Square is in the centre....
2.Beijing has a lot of the centre of shopping 改成 Beijing has a lot of shopping centres
3.There are many visitors go sightseeing to Beijing and treval 改成 There are many visitors go sightseeing and traveling to Beijing.....
2.Beijing has a lot of the centre of shopping 改成 Beijing has a lot of shopping centres
3.There are many visitors go sightseeing to Beijing and treval 改成 There are many visitors go sightseeing and traveling to Beijing.....
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