一篇有关生日聚会的英语小短文

Last May 4th was my birthday. I had a party at my home.
My relatives and friends came to my home in the evening. And I got a lot of presents from them. My mother prepared a big birthday cake for me.
There are even candles on it. After singing the song “Happy birthday”, I shared the cake with my friend and relatives. Then we watched TV and listened to music. Same of the girls danced with the music. We had a good time that day.
Now I want to say “Thank you my friends. Thank you my parents! I ’m so happy!”
这样可以吗?望采纳