谢谢了(应该是有十处错误)Yesterday was Sunday.My mother told me buy some

谢谢了(应该是有十处错误)
Yesterday was Sunday.My mother told me buy some fruit.The nearest market was three blocks away so I have to take a bus.The bus was so crowded that I coulden't even stood straight.When I got to a market,I found that my wallet was missed.Not knowing what to do,I cried sad.After a while,a kind lady came over and asked me how I was crying.After hearing my story,she immediately gave me some money.I thanked him and went back home.When I arrived home,my mother was about to leave to find out me.She didn't punish me for losing the money,but told me to be less careful when taking a bus the next time
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Yesterday was Sunday.My mother told me (1 加to)buy some fruit.The nearest market was three blocks away so I have (2.改have为had) to take a bus.The bus was so crowded that I coulden't even stood (3.改stood为stand) straight.When I got to a (4.改a为the) market,I found that my wallet was missed (5.改missed为missing) .Not knowing what to do,I cried sad (6.改sad 为 sadly).After a while,a kind lady came over and asked me how (7.改how为why) I was crying.After hearing my story,she immediately gave me some money.I thanked him (8.改him为her) and went back home.When I arrived home,my mother was about to leave to find out (9.去掉out) me.She didn't punish me for losing the money,but told me to be less (10.改less为more) careful when taking a bus the next time

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Yesterday was Sunday. My mother told me TO buy some fruit. The nearest market was three blocks away so I HAD to take a bus. The bus was so crowded that I couldn't even STAND straight. When I got to TH...

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