围绕fever(发烧)初中英语作文

Yesterday,we had a discussion.The topic is.What is my dream?Every one has his dream.Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists.My dream is to become a doctor.
My friends asked me why.I told them my story.When I was a small boy I was very weak.Once I was terribly iii.I had a high fever.My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me.Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town.They took me there.I was saved.
A good doctor can save people' s lives.From then on I decided to become a doctor.I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard.I am sure my dream will come true.

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why not do it yourself?
you are the student not others.
How much would you pay for it?