英语达人来看下这些句子对不对这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of ar
英语达人来看下这些句子对不对
这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of areas drown.(make+n.+adj.) 2.We had lost 437 million from now on,with thousands of people homeless and roads destroyed.(with+n.+过去分词) 3.Therer are some classmates who have bad eating habits.(会不会不大native?）4.For example,some classmates don"t eat breakfast,some like eating snacks,some are particular about dood and others eat too much food.(可以这样表达吗?)5.It is a good eating habit that is important because it is good for our health.(这样写强调句对吗?) 如果写对了,请跟我说下,如果错了,请讲下为什么顺便改正!
这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of areas drown.(make+n.+adj.) 2.We had lost 437 million from now on,with thousands of people homeless and roads destroyed.(with+n.+过去分词) 3.Therer are some classmates who have bad eating habits.(会不会不大native?）4.For example,some classmates don"t eat breakfast,some like eating snacks,some are particular about dood and others eat too much food.(可以这样表达吗?)5.It is a good eating habit that is important because it is good for our health.(这样写强调句对吗?) 如果写对了,请跟我说下,如果错了,请讲下为什么顺便改正!
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我先说一下总体感觉.句子一看就是为了用结构而造出来的,怪怪的.不过用于练习可以.有问题的句子是：
2.With thousands of homeless people and roads destroyed,we have lost 427 million so far.
homeless是形容词,放在名词前面；from now on和过去完成时不搭.
3.There are some students with bad eating habits.不知道你是不是必须用定语从句,英语简洁一点更好,原句classmate换成students更好些,或者my classmate比较好.
4.The bad habits include picky eating,overeating,not having breakfast,and eating too much snacks.你那个表达肯定是不对的.英语是讲求逻辑的.句子与句子间必须有连词来表示逻辑关系.你的句子是并列关系,一般用and.由于句式类似,我觉得用名词更为简洁.长一些的名字结构往后放.
5.Good eating habits is extremly important because it is good for our health.这句我一时没想到怎么用强调句改.我用中文也找不出你要强调什么……
2.With thousands of homeless people and roads destroyed,we have lost 427 million so far.
homeless是形容词,放在名词前面；from now on和过去完成时不搭.
3.There are some students with bad eating habits.不知道你是不是必须用定语从句,英语简洁一点更好,原句classmate换成students更好些,或者my classmate比较好.
4.The bad habits include picky eating,overeating,not having breakfast,and eating too much snacks.你那个表达肯定是不对的.英语是讲求逻辑的.句子与句子间必须有连词来表示逻辑关系.你的句子是并列关系,一般用and.由于句式类似,我觉得用名词更为简洁.长一些的名字结构往后放.
5.Good eating habits is extremly important because it is good for our health.这句我一时没想到怎么用强调句改.我用中文也找不出你要强调什么……
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sylvia1122 幼苗
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嗯，大部分都正确，至于地道不，我也不好说呢。在第二句中，million是复数，要加上s。根据句意，应是迄今为止，我们已损失了4.37亿了，from now on意为从现在起，不合语态语意，应换做up to now.在第五句中，你的意思应该是：拥有一个好的饮食习惯很重要。表达即：It is important to keep a good eating habits....
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