写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题

写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack of self-confidence．You should smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．