帮忙看一下这段文字有什么语法错误吗?初学英语,多多指教

Already ten years.Ten years ago,when we [were] young,we [ didn't] have the courage.Sorry,I didn't [ go ] to high school together with you; I'm so sorry,I'm married; and thank you,that night you did't let me make special things.Maybe missed something,it means [ missing] one lifetime,but I still want to,always ......Maybe I will abandon my family,to be deserted by one's followers,Even though we have no results,even you never give me hope.But now,I will try my best [ to be responsible for my family ] ,and must do,because I'm a man.Thank you [for giving] the memories for me,I will treasure the life,you have been [a very important person in my heart ]
这表达方式好特别 改了几处常规的表达

在你的文章的基础上该为：
It has already been ten years. Ten years ago, when we were young, we ddin't have the courage. Sorry, I didn't go to high school together with you; I'm so sorry. I'm married; and tha...

有啊。。。I'm married; and thank you。。分号不对