语句不通顺,求强人解答!When you love someone so deeply,he become your l

语句不通顺,求强人解答!
When you love someone so deeply,he become your life.It is easy to succumb to overwhelming fears inside,blindly I imagined I could keep you under glass.Now I understand to hold you, I must open up my hands,and watch you riss.Fly abandonly into the sun.If you shold return to me,we truly were meant to be.I have learned that beauty,has to flourish in the light.You have given me the courage,to be all that Ican.And Itruly feel you heart will,lead you back to me when you are read to land