请各位英语高手帮忙改下女儿的英语小作文(因本人学问有限).my room is little.(我的小房间)

请各位英语高手帮忙改下女儿的英语小作文(因本人学问有限).my room is little.(我的小房间)
there is a bed in the room.the bed is brown.it is on the right.there is a computer in the room.the computer is nearthe wall.there is a desk in the room.the desk is near the computer.there are some books on the desk.there are some picturse in the room.the pictures are on the wall.
telikobi1 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

bafggu 幼苗

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题目改成my little room
把都有什么写在一起,再写分别在什么地方就会好一点!

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候鸟树 幼苗

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There is a bed in the room. The bed is brown. It is on the right. There is a computer in the room.The computer is near the wall. There is a desk in the room.The desk ...

1年前

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ellenwang91 幼苗

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有一句可以改改更好,就是there is a desk in the room,可以改为,The desk is beside of the computer .意思是在电脑旁边是桌子。这样使文章意思更加连贯。

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