英文读后感语法和文章修饰The script tells a loving story between a self r
英文读后感语法和文章修饰
The script tells a loving story between a self reliant girl Liang Mu Chen and a chairwoman’s son Ren Guang Xi.
At the beginning,the rich schoolboy just wants to make fun of the girl and close to her for some impure intentions.However,after some days’ contact,he is especially touched by the girls’ sad destiny that she lost her parents at the early time and abused by her stepfather now.Meanwhile,the girls’ appearance has changed his attitude toward the true love.Finally,he has loved her.
Unfortunately,a rainstorm is around the corner.Guang Xi lost his previous memory temporarily after a major brain surgery.The pitiful girl is forced to leave him reluctantly by his mother.
As the time passed by,Mu Chen who has the man’s child becomes a single mother and she determines to keep this secret for ever.Yet,as we are going to say “God’s people get”,they met again accidentally after 6 years.Then the story is going to the end,everyone can guess the denouement that they have the happy life through many up and downs.
下一站，幸福的观后感 请英文老师或大哥哥姐姐修改下
The script tells a loving story between a self reliant girl Liang Mu Chen and a chairwoman’s son Ren Guang Xi.
At the beginning,the rich schoolboy just wants to make fun of the girl and close to her for some impure intentions.However,after some days’ contact,he is especially touched by the girls’ sad destiny that she lost her parents at the early time and abused by her stepfather now.Meanwhile,the girls’ appearance has changed his attitude toward the true love.Finally,he has loved her.
Unfortunately,a rainstorm is around the corner.Guang Xi lost his previous memory temporarily after a major brain surgery.The pitiful girl is forced to leave him reluctantly by his mother.
As the time passed by,Mu Chen who has the man’s child becomes a single mother and she determines to keep this secret for ever.Yet,as we are going to say “God’s people get”,they met again accidentally after 6 years.Then the story is going to the end,everyone can guess the denouement that they have the happy life through many up and downs.
下一站，幸福的观后感 请英文老师或大哥哥姐姐修改下
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The TV play depicts a love story between a self-reliant girl Liang Mu Chen and a chairwoman’s son Ren Guang Xi.
At the beginning,the rich schoolboy just wanted to make fun of the girl and got close to her for some impure motives.However,after a period of contact,he was especially shocked by the girl's miserable fortune that she lost her parents at the childhood and has been being maltreated by her stepfather .Meanwhile,the girl's appearance changed his attitude towards true love.Finally,he can't help falling in love with her.
Unfortunately,a rainstorm was around the corner.Guang Xi lost his memory temporarily after a major brain surgery.The pitiful girl was forced to leave him reluctantly by his mother.
As time went by,Mu Chen had a baby and became a single mother but she determined to keep this secret forever.Yet,as we are going to say “God’s people get”,they happened to meet again after 6 years.Then the story came to the end.Guess what?just as we could imagine,it has a so-called happy ending that they live happily after going through many ups and downs.
Firstly,我想说,你这篇文章写的很精彩,但是既然是读后感,你却没有写出你的感受,而只是单纯的把这部电视剧的情节呈现了出来.
Secondly,我也不是什么高手,但就文章中出现的问题发表一下个人见通篇文章是在叙述情节,一般来说应该是以一般过去时为主.最起码主要时态应该是一致的,在你的表达中,时态有点混乱,有些句子还用错啦时态.还有and 连接的并列结构,要注意动词时态的一致性.还有就是注意一些地道简洁的表达,如失忆我们说lose one's memory即可,而不用lose one's previous memory这样显得啰嗦.还有爱情故事是love story 而不是loving story.美国歌手Taylor Swift有一首歌就叫《love story》,推荐你听,可好听啦
To sum up,我认为这篇文章还是很好的,语言流畅,叙述完整.嘿嘿,继续努力吧!
At the beginning,the rich schoolboy just wanted to make fun of the girl and got close to her for some impure motives.However,after a period of contact,he was especially shocked by the girl's miserable fortune that she lost her parents at the childhood and has been being maltreated by her stepfather .Meanwhile,the girl's appearance changed his attitude towards true love.Finally,he can't help falling in love with her.
Unfortunately,a rainstorm was around the corner.Guang Xi lost his memory temporarily after a major brain surgery.The pitiful girl was forced to leave him reluctantly by his mother.
As time went by,Mu Chen had a baby and became a single mother but she determined to keep this secret forever.Yet,as we are going to say “God’s people get”,they happened to meet again after 6 years.Then the story came to the end.Guess what?just as we could imagine,it has a so-called happy ending that they live happily after going through many ups and downs.
Firstly,我想说,你这篇文章写的很精彩,但是既然是读后感,你却没有写出你的感受,而只是单纯的把这部电视剧的情节呈现了出来.
Secondly,我也不是什么高手,但就文章中出现的问题发表一下个人见通篇文章是在叙述情节,一般来说应该是以一般过去时为主.最起码主要时态应该是一致的,在你的表达中,时态有点混乱,有些句子还用错啦时态.还有and 连接的并列结构,要注意动词时态的一致性.还有就是注意一些地道简洁的表达,如失忆我们说lose one's memory即可,而不用lose one's previous memory这样显得啰嗦.还有爱情故事是love story 而不是loving story.美国歌手Taylor Swift有一首歌就叫《love story》,推荐你听,可好听啦
To sum up,我认为这篇文章还是很好的,语言流畅,叙述完整.嘿嘿,继续努力吧!
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