【求英语达人】短文求鉴定.My favourite animalanimal.I love all animal .Bu

【求英语达人】短文求鉴定.
My favourite animalanimal.
I love all animal .But,my favourite animal is only one.The are cats.Cats like eat fishs and mouses.Cats is good jumper.They have about fifteen years old on them lifes.They don't like water.So,they can'y swim.But cats can night vision!So,they can to get mouses in the exening.I love cats.
想测试一下,就写了个很无聊的短文,能把错都挑出来,并讲讲么?
永远不转身 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

大红帽 幼苗

共回答了11个问题采纳率:100% 举报

1.应该是i love all animals.动物应用复数.2.语序不当,改为,i have only one favourite animal.
3.第三句改为,it is cat.4.应是like doing sth或like to do sth5.单强调fish不可数6.应是cats are good jumpers.注意单复数7.can后加动词原形.别的我不敢确定,应该还有别的错误

1年前

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惊鸿照影yang 幼苗

共回答了18个问题 举报

My favourite animal
I love animals .But,my favourite animal is a cat.Cats like eating fishs and mouses.Cats are good jumpers.They can live for about fifteen years in their lives.They don't like...

1年前

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hh习习 幼苗

共回答了28个问题 举报

animals
my favourite animal are cats
fish mause
are
they can live 15 years all their lives
倒数第二句啥意思啊?看着这么别扭呢

1年前

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