HELP~HELP~改错一.(共10处错误)It was quiet late at night.I was readi

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一.(共10处错误)
It was quiet late at night.I was reading a newspaper in my room .When I heard someone to knock at the door ,I opened it and see a young man
put on glasses standing there.He said that he was a friend of my sister and wanted to have a talk with her .I wondered if my sister had such a friend so I had to let him in.As he talked I found that he knew nothing about my sister.Then I came to know that his words was not ture.Suddenly my sister rushed in and the young man was so surprising that he didn't know to do what for a moment .I caught the man"s arm at omce while my sister
send for the policeman .He was only a thief.
二.(共4处错误)
The animals are useful to the desert people in many way ,They eat the meat ,drink the milk of the animals,
They use camels to carry water ,food ,tents and another things .The people of the desert have to keep moving from place to place.They must always watch for grass or desert plants for their animals ,When there is no more food for there animals ,they move to another place,the desert people are friendly .They would not never refuse to help in trouble,they would give them food and water.
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糜非鄢 种子

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一.(共10处错误)
It was quiet(1.quite) late at night.I was reading a(2.不要) newspaper in my room .When I heard someone to knock(3.to knock---knocking) at the door ,I opened it and see a young man
put on(4.put on--wearing) glasses standing there.He said that he was a friend of my sister(5.sister's) and wanted to have a talk with her .I wondered if my sister had such a(6.去掉) friend so I had to let him in.As he talked I found that he knew nothing about my sister.Then I came to know that his words was not ture.Suddenly my sister rushed in and the young man was so surprising(7.surprised) that he didn't know to do what(8.to do what-what to do) for a moment .I caught the man"s arm at omce(9.once) while my sister
send for(10.sent for) the policeman .He was only a thief.
二.(共4处错误)
The animals are useful to the desert people in many way(ways) ,They eat the meat ,drink the milk of the animals,
They use camels to carry water ,food ,tents and another(other) things .The people of the desert have to keep moving from place to place.They must always watch for(look for) grass or desert plants for their animals ,When there is no more food for there animals ,they move to another place,the desert people are friendly .They would not(去掉) never refuse to help in trouble,they would give them food and water.

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srysry 幼苗

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先给你改几个地方 newspaper 不可数 reading newspaper
i heard someone knocking at the door
i opened it and saw a young man

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sb688 幼苗

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1 It was quiet(quite) late at night.I was reading a(去掉) newspaper in my room .When I heard someone to knock(to knock改成knocking) at the door , I opened it and see(saw) a young man
put on(put on改成w...

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