我们老师叫写的一篇作文,求改!For university students,should they be requir

我们老师叫写的一篇作文,求改!
For university students,should they be required to attend classes?Or that going to classes should be optional for students.Which point of view do you agree with?
For university student,most of us already grew up,and we have our own ideas on many things,especially those related to ourselves.today I want to say something about study.As a student,study is much more important no matter at what time,so there are 2 views:should they be required to attend classes?Or that going to classes should be optional for students?
In my opinion,I think we should be required to attend classes!Why?Some student may think they can do the study well by themselves,but that only a few can do it.There's so much temptation in your life that you cannot concentrate your mind to study,like playing computer games,going shopping,doing part-time job,traveling,sleeping and falling in love with your lover,you will spend much more time and energy on it.Also,you may lose your head when you facing these,the worst is you learn to skip class.I know our 90,don’t want to be limited,and like to live in our own way,what’s more,we want to choose the class which we like to go on,but do you really have a strong self-control?
“require” is not horrible,and it in our study life is much more important.we know everything has two sides,if you try to accept it,you may find it is not too bad,at least It will get rid of your laziness.
求改作文哦,有助于提高嘛.
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第5行 student要加s but that only a few can do it. 去掉that,2个句子只要一个连词but就可以了
There's so much temptation in your life that you cannot concentrate your mind on your study, like playing computer games, going shopping, doing part-time jobs, traveling, sleeping and falling in love with someone, you will spend much more time and energy on it. Also, you may lose your head when you face these, the worst is that you learn to skip class. I know our 90s, don’t want to be limited, and like to live in our own way. What’s more, we want to choose the class which we like to go to, but do you really have a strong self-control?
“require” is not horrible, and it is much more important in our study and life . We know everything has two sides, if you try to accept it, you may find it is not too bad, at least It will get rid of your laziness. 注意句首字母大写咯,没什么大问题,注意一些细节就可以了.能写到那么多需要改的已经不错了,四级肯定过了吧?

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