GRE 作文 两篇Argument的提纲,我是看不懂了,看得好糊涂了 不要张东雷和孙远的!

GRE 作文 两篇Argument的提纲,我是看不懂了,看得好糊涂了 不要张东雷和孙远的!
原文如下,黄皮书第158个第159题
158,(卫生健康,社会/论断/——)The Trash-Site Safety Council has recently conducted a statewide study(5) of possible harmful effects of garbage sites on the health of people living near the sites.A total of five sites and 300 people(1) were examined.The study revealed,on average,only a small statistical correlation between the proximity of homes to garbage sites and the incidence of unexplained rashes(2) among people living in these homes.Furthermore,although it is true that people living near the largest trash sites had a slightly higher incidence of the rashes,there was otherwise no correlation between the size of the garbage sites and people's health(4).Therefore,the council is pleased to announce that the current system of garbage sites does not pose a significant health hazard(3).We see no need to restrict the size of such sites in our state or to place any restrictions(6) on the number of homes built near the sites.
159,(社会/建议/对比)The nation of Claria covers a vast physical area.But despite wide geographic differences,many(1) citizens are experiencing rising costs of electricity.A recent study of household electric costs in Claria found that families who cooled their houses with fans alone spent more on electricity than did families using air conditioners alone for cooling.However,those households that reported using both fans and air conditioners spent less(3) on electricity than those households that used either fans or air conditioners alone(2).Thus,the citizens of Claria should follow the study's recommendation and use both air conditioners and fans in order to save money on electricity(4).
hxyexcel 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

parfum1 花朵

共回答了20个问题采纳率:90% 举报

第一篇
1.调查的5个地方和300人数是否足够,有否代表性
2.没有证据不是垃圾场的原因,解释不了可能是技术落后.
3.没有证据和垃圾场的大小无关,虽然数量上升不多,但是程度变严重了.
4.没证据可以不限制size,作者忽略了可能会导致其他疾病
第二篇
1.study的人数,地区涵盖是否广,代表性.
2.错误类比,可能地区太广,维度不同,所以每个地区的温度不同,所以每个地方使用的电风扇的数量和时间都不同.用电风扇耗电可能是该地区热,每天电风扇24小时开着,并且开了很多台,而空调用的少是因为地区温度不冷,用的时间少.
3.作者忽略了其他用电量,即使使用电风扇的家庭用电多,可能是其他电器而不是电风扇用的.

1年前

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daoquanzhishui 幼苗

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第一篇讲垃圾与人的生活环境影响什么的。第二篇讲用电的。用翻译啊~

1年前

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大站快车 幼苗

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