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应该说以上的四个译文中 lemmenqin 的最好,只是还有些问题,修改如下:
gald 改为 glad (拼写错误)
see...news 最好改成learn...news (消息可以获悉,所以与learn搭配.不能用see)
your great care shown on me 改为 your great care shown for me (应该说care for sb.)
I am very appreciated to you.改为 I am very grateful to you.(可说I appreciate your help.我感激你的帮助.不可说be appreciated to sb.)
修改的全文:I am so glad to learn the good news of you.This is a good start for me.Good marks depend on my hard work,your excellent lectures and your great care shown for me.Therefore,I am very grateful to you.
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